1st Draft animatic

I had a peer review last Monday and this was the Animatic I showed. At the time I felt that the review was a total disaster, however on reflection and support from my team, i realised that it was infact a blessing in disguise. I've uploaded this to show you the difference and I will upload a new Animatic within the week. Despite the critism which was a bit over the top, I plan on making this film to the best of my teams ability, which I know will equal a brilliant short!